Four Tips for Writing (and Winning) Scholarship Essay Contests

Four Tips for Writing (and Winning) Scholarship Essay Contests

Four Tips for Writing (and Winning) Scholarship Essay Contests

Four Tips for Writing (and Winning) Scholarship Essay Contests

IAM141.org

You don’t need to be the best writer in the world to win a scholarship. You just need to follow a few smart rules, speak from the heart, and—this part is important—show up.

Here are four ways to give yourself the best chance at winning.

 

Know the Rule Book Better Than the Competition

 

Did the contest ask for proof of enrollment? Did you include all your contact info? These might sound like small details—but in scholarship contests, small things matter.

Think of it like college football: the team that knows the rulebook inside and out walks onto the field with an advantage.

Every year, there are great essays that miss out because of a missing signature, an extra word, or a tiny rule slip. It’s not about being perfect—it’s about staying sharp. Double-check everything, and you’ll already be ahead of the game before the judges even read your first sentence.

Double Check the Official Rules for the Adolph Stutz Memorial Essay Contest Here > 

 

Write Like a Real Person

 

 

Most scholarship essays sound the same: stiff, overly formal, and just plain boring..

Want to stand out? Be real.

Tell a true story about yourself. Talk about something you care about. Explain how you’ve grown, what you’ve learned, or what you hope to change. Write the way you talk—just cleaner. If it sounds like you, that’s a good thing. You want the judges to remember your essay… and you want them to remember you.

Great writing isn’t about big words—it’s about honest ones.

 

Ediit… Ed it… Edit!

 

Even the best essay in the world can lose points if it’s full of spelling mistakes or clunky sentences. That’s why editing is so important.

After you finish writing your first draft, step away from it for a bit—then come back with fresh eyes. Read it out loud. Check for grammar, flow, and tone. Ask yourself: “Does this sound like me?” A clean, confident, and clearly written essay will always stand out.

Tools like spellcheck and even AI writing assistants can help you find grammar mistakes or suggest better wording. AI can even help you brainstorm ideas. Just don’t let it take over. Scholarship judges want to hear your story, in your voice. Use AI to sharpen what you’ve already written—not to speak for you.

Better yet, ask a friend, teacher, or family member to read your essay before you submit it. A second opinion can catch little mistakes you might miss.

Bottom line: Good writing is rewriting. So take your time. Edit, polish, and then edit again.

 

 

Just Show Up… In Case Nobody Else Does.

 

Here’s a little-known secret about essay contests: sometimes… not that many people enter.

That’s right. There are years when amazing scholarships go unclaimed simply because too few people turned something in. So while others might talk themselves out of it, you just have to show up.

Don’t psych yourself out thinking the competition will be too intense. You might be the only one who actually follows the rules, finishes the essay, and hits “submit.” And if that happens?

Money.

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Four Tips for Writing (and Winning) Scholarship Essay Contests

IAM141.org

You don’t need to be the best writer in the world to win a scholarship. You just need to follow a few smart rules, speak from the heart, and—this part is important—show up.

Here are four ways to give yourself the best chance at winning.

 

Know the Rules Better than the Competition

Did the contest ask for proof of enrollment? Did you include all your contact info? These might sound like small details—but in scholarship contests, small things matter.

Think of it like college football: the team that knows the rulebook inside and out walks onto the field with an advantage.

Every year, there are great essays that miss out because of a missing signature, an extra word, or a tiny rule slip. It’s not about being perfect—it’s about staying sharp. Double-check everything, and you’ll already be ahead of the game before the judges even read your first sentence.

Double Check the Official Rules for the Adolph Stutz Memorial Essay Contest Here > 

 

Write Like a Real Person

Most scholarship essays sound the same: stiff, overly formal, and just plain boring..

Want to stand out? Be real.

Tell a true story about yourself. Talk about something you care about. Explain how you’ve grown, what you’ve learned, or what you hope to change. Write the way you talk—just cleaner. If it sounds like you, that’s a good thing. You want the judges to remember your essay… and you want them to remember you.

Great writing isn’t about big words—it’s about honest ones.

 

Ediit… Ed it… Edit!

Even the best essay in the world can lose points if it’s full of spelling mistakes or clunky sentences. That’s why editing is so important.

After you finish writing your first draft, step away from it for a bit—then come back with fresh eyes. Read it out loud. Check for grammar, flow, and tone. Ask yourself: “Does this sound like me?” A clean, confident, and clearly written essay will always stand out.

Tools like spellcheck and even AI writing assistants can help you find grammar mistakes or suggest better wording. AI can even help you brainstorm ideas. Just don’t let it take over. Scholarship judges want to hear your story, in your voice. Use AI to sharpen what you’ve already written—not to speak for you.

Better yet, ask a friend, teacher, or family member to read your essay before you submit it. A second opinion can catch little mistakes you might miss.

Bottom line: Good writing is rewriting. So take your time. Edit, polish, and then edit again.

 

 

Just Show Up… Just In Case Nobody Else Does.

Here’s a little-known secret about essay contests: sometimes… not that many people enter.

That’s right. There are years when amazing scholarships go unclaimed simply because too few people turned something in. So while others might talk themselves out of it, you just have to show up.

Don’t psych yourself out thinking the competition will be too intense. You might be the only one who actually follows the rules, finishes the essay, and hits “submit.” And if that happens?

Money.

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Dear Sisters and Brothers,

Your IAM District 141 negotiating team and United Airlines management met last week in Chicago to continue contract negotiations for seven different contracts.

Our primary focus was discussing Article Four issues in the Passenger Service and Fleet contracts. Unfortunately, there continues to be a significant gap in the discussion over improving quality of life issues that are very important to our members, such as shift bidding and relief scheduling. In fact, in some cases, we can’t even agree on the interpretation of the current language, which makes it very clear to your negotiating team why this was such an important aspect of your contract proposals and surveys.

Please know that we will continue to pursue this matter on your behalf.
On a more positive note, we reached a tentative agreement which will significantly improve the meal period language for all our members, especially our part-time members.

We will continue to fight for what our members want. Your continued support and engagement are critical to securing the contract improvements you deserve.

We will return to the negotiating table the week of May 5, 2025, where our Storekeeper subcommittee will join us to focus on proposals related to that particular contract.

In Solidarity,

Your Negotiating Committee
Olu Ajetomobi
Joe Bartz
Jill Hazamy
Victor Hernandez
Barb Martin
Terry Stansbury
Faysal Silwany
Erik Stenberg
Sue Weisner

Michael G Klemm
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District 141,
International Association of Machinists & Aerospace Workers

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7 March 2025

Dear Sisters and Brothers at United Ground Express,

Many of you have asked what happens when our contract reaches its amendable date on March 5, 2025. We want to be clear: your contract does not expire on that date. It remains in effect until a new agreement is negotiated, finalized, and approved by a membership vote, as specified in Section 10 of the agreement. This means you will continue to work under the same pay, benefits, and protections while we push for improvements at the bargaining table.

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IAM District 141 Negotiating Committee
Warren Glenn
Robert Jesel
Chris Lusk
John Staton, Jr.
Gary Welch

Michael G Klemm
President and Directing General Chair,
District 141,
International Association of Machinists & Aerospace Workers

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 Dear Sisters and Brothers at United Ground Express,

Over the last several months, your IAM District 141 negotiating team has been diligently reviewing your surveys and proposals in preparation for our first contract negotiations with United Ground Express, Inc (UGE) since our initial collective bargaining agreement eight years ago.

Last week, we met with UGE management in Chicago, Illinois, and began these important contract negotiations. During our first session, we addressed several topics of high importance to our members based on your feedback. These included Classifications and Vacancies, Hours of Service, and Paid Time Off.

We were able to successfully advocate for a fairer system for filling vacancies, ensuring that seniority plays a more significant role in the decision-making process. This was a major concern expressed by many of you in the survey.

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Robert Jesel
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Michael G Klemm
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14 January 2025

Dear Sisters and Brothers,

Your IAM District 141 negotiating team met with United Airlines management last week in Houston, Texas to continue discussions on seven collective bargaining agreements. This session focused on the Passenger Service and Fleet contracts.

The team focused on Article 4, addressing important topics for our members, including:

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  • Part-time meal periods
  • Enhancing flexibility in trade language to better align with industry standards

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IAM Workers Lead the Way.

In Solidarity,

Your Negotiating Committee
Olu Ajetomobi
Joe Bartz
Jill Hazamy
Victor Hernandez
Barb Martin
Terry Stansbury
Faysal Silwany
Erik Stenberg
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Michael G Klemm
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Dear Sisters and Brothers,

Your IAM District 141 negotiating team met with United Airlines last week in Chicago, Illinois, to continue talks on seven different contracts covering our United Membership. The Storekeeper and Security Officer subcommittees were present to cover items specific to those two Collective Bargaining Agreements.

Here are the highlights of these talks.

Storekeeper Subcommittee: The Storekeeper Subcommittee reached tentative agreements (TAs) on Designated Station Trainers (DST) and probationary employees. We also discussed tooling and recovery trips, both domestic and international. However, these topics need more discussion.

Security Officers: To improve Security Officer compensation, we proposed premium pay for special qualifications. We are now waiting for the Company’s response.

Security Officer Article 1 Tentative Agreement: We reached a Tentative Agreement on Article 1 of the Security Officers Contract that includes updated language to reflect and respect the modern roles of Security Officers. Discussions about meal and break periods are ongoing.

Passenger Service and Fleet Service Agreements: Talks for the Passenger Service and Fleet Service agreements also continued throughout the week. This session focused on the key issues of shift bidding, preferencing, outage relief, part-time meal periods, and mandatory overtime. While no Tentative Agreements were reached, we believe the Company now better understands why the improvements we proposed matter to our members.

We will return to the bargaining table the week of January 6. The Storekeeper Subcommittee will also be present to resume work on their contract.

Remember: IAM WORKERS LEAD THE WAY.

In Solidarity

 

Your Negotiating Committee
Olu Ajetomobi
Joe Bartz
Jill Hazamy
Victor Hernandez
Barb Martin
Terry Stansbury
Faysal Silwany
Erik Stenberg
Sue Weisner

Michael G Klemm
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District 141,
International Association of Machinists & Aerospace Workers

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